One day on the west coast of new zealand a tribe called taka hai
by the moana they were living peacefully until one day they saw a war ship
as it slowly came into shaw one tinnie at a time till they had all got of the ship.
They had around 4000 men all armed getting ready for war they thought it would be easy because the tribe had no weapons and they men had at the boat with cannons .
then the general said fire! and the fort as hard as they could . Slowly one by one they dropped .The warriors had to get close enough with their spears but the big ships were blowing there cover. So the warriors said we have had enough so they used a weapon the way that they would use to hunt animals . A stick 2 pieces of flax it could fly about 200 meters so the warriors went into the bush were there was harakeke. suddenly out of the bush came hundreds of harakeke arows it dropped about 300 men but as nightfall came .
The soldiers came came looking for warriors they ambushed them with their harakeke arrows it dropped 50 more to the ground so who were in the bush they were stuck there because the other soldiers stranded them and took all the tinnies there was about 140 soldiers left so they got out when they had gone . so at first light the warriors shot there harakeke arows and hit 23 but then the soldiers found out which area of the bush they were in so they fired ! like mad and they dropped nearly sixty it was 11 against 140 so they moved to a different spot north of the bush they fired non - stop and then one of the warriors found a soldier's weapon but just last light the warrior
found them so he tried to get in close found there went back and said brothers huddle up i have found the camp we shall raid them during the night .
So the warriors plan was to take some weapons and finish them but one of the soldiers saw them so he woke up the who shot is gun and SAID EVERY BODY UP ITS WAR! so they couldn't see them but the warriors could see them so they shot as many bullets as they could . all the soldiers were dropping one by one till there about four of them so they please give us mercy so they you stay on this land so build them a waka to go home. the end
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Writing : Narrative Legends.
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Writing Narrative Legends
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I need help to write a narrative legend.
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I can write a narrative legend if I am guided.
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I can use some structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I can use some descriptive words to describe characters, setting and events.
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I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I use a range of descriptive words to describe characters, settings and events.
I use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences.
I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.
I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.
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I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I use a range of descriptive words cand details to describe characters, settings and events. develop connection with the audience.
I deliberately use a range of simple, compound and complex GBBGV sentences to set the mood of my writing.
I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.
I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.
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